Nishabd

Amanat

June 28, 2007 · 14 Comments

surkh si khushi hai..nadaan si zaroorat
dheere dheere saaso ko bhi ho chuki ek muddat
aasmano ke pare..kahi khil sa raha ek..foool
kaise kahe hai kya..kah do to tum ho na kaho to nazaakkat

thodi si karne ka dil karta hai ek shrarat..
badmash ye ..na farmaan sab.. ungliyo par likhte hai ek nasihat

kadmo pe kadm rakh ke chalna..
thodi dabti..kuch ruthati..
har arzoo ki..ek choti si chahat

chahat..ke dhaage ka sira..
baandhe apne haathon me.rakha hai
teri nazdeekiyo ki amanat

Categories: hindi · love · poem · sunrise

14 responses so far ↓

  • bhavna // July 3, 2007 at 2:57 pm | Reply

    najook shbdoo ko itni khubasurti se sirf aap hi piro sakte hai gr8 pic .

  • Dream Catcher // July 3, 2007 at 3:03 pm | Reply

    bhavna: chalo koi to hamare is gumnaam nishabd raah par bhi bhatke aata hai..ha ha

    aisa to nahi hia mohtarma…khhobsoorati to aakho ki chaya hai..aapne aisa dekhato ho gaya :D ..

    thanx a bunch

  • Ekta // July 6, 2007 at 6:44 pm | Reply

    bahut khoob kaha..

    “aur unhi nazdikeeyon ki kasam..kabhi na keh paaye aapse aapke meethe se sitam..”

  • Dream Catcher // July 8, 2007 at 10:41 am | Reply

    Ekta :)

    ye sitam or pal bhar mein guzri zindagi..
    Kshan haatho mein chupa loo kahi mil jaaye bandagi..

  • rashi // July 10, 2007 at 9:38 pm | Reply

    kya baat hai…

    amazing is the word !

  • Me Thinks // July 11, 2007 at 5:29 pm | Reply

    mujhe hindi mein likhna to nahi aata lekin aapne jo tasveer lagayi hai aur jin shabdo ka upyog kiya hai, vo padhke to koi bhi pyar karna chahega…

    beautiful…

  • Dream Catcher // July 11, 2007 at 6:32 pm | Reply

    rashi: :) sirf ek muskurahat hai ab to

    Me thinks: aapki hindi bilkul sahi hai ..although i knw u dont write hindi..par jo bhi kaha dil ko choo gayi..

    pyaar kaun nahi karna chahta..bas milta kaha hai janaab…ha ha…

    ye shabd shayad rundhe gale se nikali kuch baatein hai..

    ok the secret of this poem is i was doing night shift or mene bahot din baad sunrise dekha..bas usi waqt i wrote few lines..:)

  • kaylee // July 14, 2007 at 5:26 am | Reply

    I am confused……

  • Nikita // July 16, 2007 at 12:21 am | Reply

    I am so full write now…i wanna cry! just beautiful…

  • Ekta // July 20, 2007 at 8:22 am | Reply

    “chahat..ke dhaage ka sira..
    baandhe apne haathon me.rakha hai
    teri nazdeekiyo ki amanat”

    jee lenge aur ek zindagi..
    fir ek baar marr jayenge,
    puchna mat,na keh payenge..
    amanat ho amanat ki,
    ro lenge thoda, aur thoda chupaenge…

  • Dream Catcher // August 1, 2007 at 12:24 pm | Reply

    kaylee Its in hindi other language..:)

    Nikita cry..kyo..??

    Ekta

    chupa ke kai raaz thodi doori ki samjh hai
    koshish karte hame marne ki zeena ek dard hai

    poochte nahi bar rokna shab ki raho ko
    ek zariya savera dhoodhne ka sabab hai..

    m mesmerized by ur way :)

  • UZUMAKI // August 9, 2007 at 4:02 pm | Reply

    Beautiful & inspiring pic.

  • Ekta // August 30, 2007 at 9:20 pm | Reply

    “kadmo pe kadm rakh ke chalna..
    thodi dabti..kuch ruthati..
    har arzoo ki..ek choti si chahat”

    aur unhi chahaton ki ek choti si arzoo..
    halke kadmon se paas aati hai,
    muskura ka,r fir wohi meetha sa dard de jaati hai..
    dard dena inse seekho..,
    dard lena ke bahane toh de jaati hai..

  • Realistic me // September 7, 2007 at 11:16 pm | Reply

    Aapka toh jawaab nahi!!!
    Kya khoob likha hai.

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