Wrote it as comment in a blog..just felt like putting here..
aah!! ye pyaar..khwaabo ki taabir kya kahiye
dhadkne gulaam naseeb do ghadi thehrna bhi na dije
hotho pe jaa tiki hai ab..kapkapati adhro ke niche
jhaak ke dekhti hai aksar..kabhi rukne na dije…
na-paak hai na farmaan hai..tarzumaan ye nazme-e-khaas hai
inke aabro ko apne lafzo mein chupaane na dije..
bas kehti hai mauje is naseem mein basi kahi
ab ruki to behne na dije…
taabir: meaning
adhro: lips
trazumaan: interpreter
nazme-e-khas: special song,poem
naseem : wind
You know that ideal love that each of us dreams of from childhood? That's you!
10 responses so far ↓
bhavna // August 11, 2007 at 8:40 pm |
thodi ya kahe to bhut galibana likhne lage hai aap but accha hai ham kah sakenge ki ham dusare galib ko jaante hai
Realistic me // September 8, 2007 at 12:03 am |
M at loss of words !
Hum toh aapke kaayal ho gaye.
Sneha // December 1, 2007 at 7:42 pm |
mujhe yeh decode karne ke liye 15 min lage….
meri hindi ki vocabulary bohot kharaab hai…
par akhir mein samajh gayi…
is gustakhi ke liye maafi chahti hun…
par arz kiya hai..
ehsaas jo mere dil mein hai,
na nazm, na naseem se…
na labon, na lafzon se…
bayaan ho sakti hai…
dhadkane likhti hai daastan mere naseeb ki…
inhe padhne ke liye..
meri saanson ko samajhna zaroori hai…
btw…i’m still curious…;)
HR // December 26, 2007 at 1:39 am |
Cool hai dude
neers // February 1, 2008 at 1:11 pm |
wow!!! subhan-allah!
Realistic me // March 10, 2008 at 9:44 pm |
Waiting for the next…
Shruti // July 20, 2008 at 11:01 pm |
waah waah.janaab.kiske liye likha hai?
Puja // October 23, 2008 at 12:21 am |
You are a very meaningful writer. Your peoms are not concocted with meaningless urdu. They have a deeper honesty. If you dont already then please take your writing seriously. Keep up the work!
Dream Catcher // October 23, 2008 at 10:50 am |
thanks you all for pepping me up always .. i m not a frequent writer but the comments which come in my mailbox…always makes my day..n then some part of me pulls me back..thanks for not making me leave writing.. thanks for making me live this
strawberrymargaritas // April 27, 2009 at 10:29 pm |
i hadn’t known such beautiful words existed. amazing..